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Tina Kuligowski
April 18, 2026
Clearly AI, but it works
This is a really sweet, low drama love story and I enjoyed it. But if I may suggest to the author, please read the work that your AI is writing. The timelines in chapter 5 and six were a mess and if you don’t keep track of the details throughout the book which were repeated often enough that when they change, it’s jarring. Just pay attention to what’s being turned out.