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raveagle18
May 19, 2026
Lost in the details
At the beginning of the story Jamie is driving a Volvo that is too good for the town. Once Marce returns Cole is driving the Volvo.
At the restaurant Jamie tells the librarian that Cole was a former employer. When Cole is having his meltdown he whines consistently about calling Jamie an employer at the restaurant.
They are little things that should have been caught in editing but were not. I find them distracting.